Re:259 http://lookupweb.us/gulfup.cc . Somewhat of a last
. Somewhat of a last straw for me, this kind of writing. It may be the point of the story, to see and hear only the narrator’s view of things, but I find it an irritating way to narrate. Indeed, I dislike the kind of 但竄テ徒now-it-all但竄タ narrative tone. It keeps me at a distance and I wouldn’t want to read any further.
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